Wednesday, June 26, 2013

Sometimes...

Inspired by the Teachers Write! Virtual Summer Writing Camp, I decided to create a blog to record to record my writing.  In the past I have kept my writing to myself.  Yesterday, I took the plunge and posted my quick-write online.  Things I realized from posting-  the power of using a mentor text to inspire writing, and the power of feedback to make me want to do it again.

Below is my quick-write response.

Sometimes...

Sometimes, on the aged brick patio,
As the sun breaks through the tangled branches of trees
for its final appearance,
The shy blue sky envelopes and stills me,
The franticness of the day leaves,
and I become aware.

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